I chose to share my interpretation of “The Traveling Onion” by Naomi Shihab Nye. Over the course of this semester, this poem has continued to stick with me. The first part of the poem includes information about its appearance, its texture, and questioning about where the onion came from. The second part is not so literal and talks about the onion as if it had feelings and emotions for example, being capable of crying. It comments on how the onion is often looked past and forgotten as being part of a dish.
I believe that this poem needs to be interpreted because it can be mistaken as “deceptively simple.” This poem could be read in a literal sense with ease, but it takes effort to analyze and reflect on what meaning is available to access. When we all first read this poem, we probably just perceived it as simply being about an onion. While this could apply, I believe that there is a much deeper meaning and interpretation to this poem. There is so much more being offered that would be a shame to fail to recognize its potential for wisdom and insight. It is a poem that you should read several times in order to really grasp the complexity of its message.
I believe that this poem could mean several different things depending on the reader and their experiences. I do not think that the author was talking about a literal onion, but was just using it as a metaphor. Inspired by an onion, but in my opinion, is representing a person. However, there is not just one meaning to the poem. The possibilities could be quite endless.
“When I think how far the onion has traveled
just to enter my stew today, I cold kneel and praise
All small forgotten miracles”
We often forget to remember who someone may have been before they were who they currently are in your life today. People have a past. Some people have more of a significant past than others. This person may have a story to tell, but we often fail to recognize their journey that they endured to be able to be where they are at now. Over a lifetime, we all must overcome temptations, strive to be the best we can be, and jump over hurdles. How much did it take for that person to be a part of your life? We forget that each breath that we take and each step we make mistakingly call a “small” miracle from God is something that deserves all of our praise because of its greatness. And in my opinion, I do not think that God would label anything he created as a small miracle, especially any of our lives.
“Crackly paper peeling on the drainboard,
pearly layers in smooth agreement,
the way knife enters onion
and onion falls apart on the chopping block,
a history revealed.”
This describes how a person is multifaceted. Each of us have a depth, something beyond the surface. A person has a certain appearance on the outside, an initial impression. We can describe someone’s physical description when we first meet them, but how much can we know about someone just by this observation? Even after being friends with someone for years does not mean that you have seen their history. As humans, we automatically are safe about who we allow to know private things about us. We do not automatically open up about our story. However, when we allow someone to see us “fall apart” and be open, you can see the importance of someone’s story and how it plays a part in who they have become. There’s more to someone than what just “meets the eye.” I recently heard a quote saying, “ The depth that we will allow someone to hurt us is the depth that we can be loved.” I think that this applies because it relates to being open, rather broken.
“And I would never scold the onion
for causing tears.
It is right that tears fall
for something small and forgotten."
I believe that this is saying that we should not discourage or look down on this person for showing negative emotions, for crying. One would cry if they were always being forgotten and if their story and significance is so often overlooked. How could we not have sympathy on such a thing?This particular quote would make no sense if it were actually referring to an actual onion. But in fact, I believe it is referencing people and things that most often go forgotten because the big things they do mistakingly are perceived as small.
“How at meal, we sit to eat,
commenting on texture of meat or herbal aroma
but never on the translucence of onion,
now limp, now divided,
or its traditionally honorable career:
For the sake of others,
disappear.”
It points out how the role of the onion in a dish usually goes unnoticed and unrecognized. However, from cooking school, I have learned that an onion plays a major role in so many dishes. Its pungency of flavor, texture, and aroma is irreplaceable. We would notice if it if were missing, but do not appreciate its presence. It is generally not used as the main ingredient, onion rings could be an exception however. :) The onion can be related to a “sidekick” or the “backstage person.” They are usually not the one recognized because the superhero or the actor is in the spotlight, but without those invisible people, they would not be so successful or desirable.
I like how it referred to an onion as being translucent. An onion in its raw form is white, but when it begins to be cooked down, it becomes translucent. Transluscent can be defined as transparent, clear, and free from disguise or falseness. When one thinks of it this way, a person being translucent can refer to their honesty, their openess, their dignity, or their authenticity.
People will often praise the “meat” people who take the lead role, or “herb” people that appeal to the senses immediately. However, the small onion that that is now taken apart, no longer in its original form is not even mentioned. People allow themselves to become vulnerable, taken apart, and used in honor of who they are as a person. Though they know they are not going to receive recognition, they still do it as a sacrifice for some one else. There is power in the phrase “For the sake of others, disappear.” Not many of us are willing to do this. Not many of us are good at sacrificing ourselves so that others can receive the glory. I think that the honorable things that we do that go unnoticed are the things that God treasures the most.
I believe that this interpretation matters to both myself and the reader. By reading The Traveling Onion on a surface level, just being about a literal onion, we are simply just missing out. Yes, it may be an entertaining poem but would we really get anything meaningful out of it? When you analyze what the poem could really be saying, you can see that there is a life lesson being taught. The overall message that I got was that one should not forget to recognize great, seemingly small people worthy of praise in the midst of the crowds. Take time to recognize their journey, hear their heart, allow them to share their history, appreciate their sacrifices, and see their selfless acts as an example for your own life.
